A poem can be about anything
or so they say
A poem can be about the windshield wiper on your car
that fell off during a snowstorm
with a great whack
A poem can be about the sunny day
now that it's spring
and the prayer around the urn
after the crack of guns
at the cemetery
A poem can be about the rainstorm
(which was a surprise)
the old leaves whirling in the wind
and the tiny dots of sharp rain
A poem can even be about the windshield wiper
not the one that fell off with a great crack
but the new one
put on just before the rain
which was a surprise.
(first draft of something?)
6 comments:
amazing! I love it, Diane. More, more.
My heart stopped for a moment.
This is gorgeous Diane, it is gorgeous.
I enjoyed this poem...yes, you should definitely write more!
Did you write that? Our Diane?
... I didn't think I could be any more impressed than I already was but I am (which was a surprise). ;)
Keep going!
oh dear, I'm blushing. yes, I wrote it, but it's really just a first draft...
actually the hard thing about poetry is that is hardly ever just "comes out" right...
anyway I have a couple of ideas to make it better
Lovely! I hope you'll share your final version. . . .
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